Media Coursework Evaluation
Elizabeth Wood
Over the past few weeks, I have been working with James Lock, Kane Wright and Tisya Khairuddin to produce the opening 2 minute sequence to a thriller film aimed at teenagers with the certificate 15. We planned it all from start to finish, and came up with the initial ideas ourselves.
In what ways does your media product use, develop or challenge forms and conventions of real media products?
Once we’d completed out thriller, we asked our target audience to fill out a questionnaire giving us feedback on what we had made. They said that they would definitely pay to watch it at a cinema, and therefore it must look just as professional as a film produced by an actual film company. It’s not similar to any other thriller’s I’ve seen. This could be a good thing because it means it’s a new, fresh idea. We also analysed the opening sequences of some thrillers in class. We looked at the codes and conventions used in these and my group and we put them into our own work. We looked the shots used, editing, sound, graphics, narrative structure and the mise-en scene. There were certain things which were common in all of them, such as they all left you asking questions and didn’t reveal everything straight away. We managed to put this into our own work and stick to thriller codes and conventions. We only chose certain ones, such as concealment of certain things so as not to give too much plot away, music to make the viewer on edge and cause tension and the graphics fitted in with the theme.
How does your media product represent particular social groups?
None of the thrillers we watched in class were set in a house. This is why we decided to set our here so that it was different to other ones we had seen. It was also easier to film here rather than outside or in other indoor locations.
I think that our narrative is very clear because it tells us what the stories going to be about. However it doesn’t give everything away. It’s a non linear narrative because it tells us what’s happened after the incident and it contains flashbacks.
We planned to film at my house, because we wanted to set the thriller mainly in a house. We looked at how the house was set out, and how we could work our camera angles to get the effects we wanted in the film. We chose a lot of tracking shots to make it look like the character was being followed. We also wanted to use point of view shots to show how the character was feeling, where they were and see things from their eyes. The flashback we used allowed us to see what was going on in the mind of the character, and allowed us to use a variety of shots such as close ups, high angle and low angle shots. We used the same type of shots as thrillers usually use, and the effect seemed to work very well. They way we edited it all made it look a lot more professional, and the sound effects we put over the top of the music made a really good effect.
Codes and conventions are very important in a thriller. They’re certain rules which all thrillers follow which make them what they were. We had to use them in our thriller, and research them in existing films to decide which to use, and which were most common.
I think our opening sequence was very successful. This is because it looks as professional as possible, and I think we did an excellent job on the editing. The way everything fits together is brilliant, and the music sounds like it would actually be at the beginning of a thriller. It built tension, and went with the action. This is like the music at the beginning of Seven.
We decided to go against conventional thrillers in the sense that we had a female
killer instead of a male. We think this made ours slightly different, and made it stand
out a bit more. It also made the entire plot more interesting because we could make the killer out to be just as vulnerable as her victims.
The completed production is an excellent example of a thriller. This is because we used all of the codes and conventions we wanted to produce the effect we wanted. We kept to all of the codes and conventions seen in other thrillers. It left the audience asking the right kind of questions such as ‘who was the girl who dies?’ this’ll make people want to watch on and see what happens. The character we created, Shelly, made the thriller more exciting because of the way she acted. She was a killer like conventional thrillers, however she was much more nervous and on edge. This allowed us to use a much wider variety of shots such as the outside ones, and the tracking shots.
My group and I decided to aim the film at age 15. This is because it was the best target audience because we can be a little bit more creative and use more exciting and dramatic idea. We decided to use a woman as the main character to be different from other thrillers. This was a wise decision, because it meant we could make the woman out to be either the killer or the victim and leave the audience guessing. We could make her look vulnerable so that it fitted in with the typical idea of a woman being the victim, and so that it fitted in with the rest of the plot, by the way she acted, the shots we used, the pace of the film and the camera angles we used. Using camera angles we could also make her look powerful. We used stereotype of a vulnerable woman, and her almost needing to be rescued even though she was the murderer. This is because it was a character people were able to relate to, and it meant that people would possibly be more interested if it was somebody they could identify with. On my blog I wrote about how she was being controlled by her husband to kill people, and she needed rescuing from him or to get away from him. This makes her almost look like more of a victim than the people she’s killed. My group and I decided to do this because it was more interesting than using a man or a woman who wasn’t in need of help. It made the story line more exciting, and made a change from other films.
We chose my mother Lindsey Evans to be in the film as the main character. We chose her because we wanted a middle aged female to play the leading role to make it a little bit more exciting.
What kind of media institution might distribute your media product and why?
If our film came out to be shown mainstream cinemas such as Odeon and Warner Brothers. It’s more like a mainstream thriller that something you’d see in a smell art gallery. I think it’d probably be available on the internet or on DVD. It would be easy for anybody who wants to watch it then, and might even become a bit hit. If it’s on the internet however it might be pirated and downloaded illegally. This’d mean we wouldn’t make as much money on it, and would possibly fund illegal activities. Compared to a professional film, it would be much harder to advertise, and get people to watch because we don’t have the funding. However compared to a professional film, I think
to the public, I think that the storyline’s good enough to make it popular. The camera work isn’t as good as a professional, and the sound effects aren’t as good as a real film, however I think it’s all good enough that it could be classed as professional.
Choosing our target audience was probably the easiest part of the project. It was easiest to go with certificate fifteen because these were the people it was easiest to ask what they’d like form a thriller. We’re also this age, so making an eighteen certificate would not be suitable because we can’t make something we can’t watch ourselves. We tried to make the storyline something they’d like to watch and enjoy. The surveys we gave out told us that our target audience like murder, blood and to be made on edge. I think our film may also appeal to older people. Over eighteens. This is because of the plot, and the fact that we used an older person as the character rather than a teenager. It’s someone a lot of people can relate to.
Before we started any of the filming or going about creating out film, we had to do some audience research. We created a questionnaire which I later put onto my blog. We gave it out to 30 people in our target audience. From our results, we were able to decide what to include in our thriller from what they had told us they liked. We were able to create a thriller appropriate for our age group. People told us they wanted weapons in it such as knives. We did not want to show actual violence, so we just suggested that a knife had been used by showing an empty slot in a knife rack. This was to suggest that the knife had been used in the murder of the girl in the flashbacks. We could not show the knife actually being used because we were not able to show violence of that nature because the rating’s only a 15.
What have you learnt about technologies from the process of constructing this product?
The filming took place at my house because it was the ideal setting. We had to use the technical equipment ourselves, and learn how to use it all. Before doing the real project, we did two additional projects to get more familiar with the cameras and the software on the computers. Looking at those projects and the main project, it’s very easy to see how much my skills have developed in both camerawork and editing. Even after practices, I think using the editing software was definitely my weakness. I found it quite difficult and complicated to use, and found camerawork much easier.
Looking back at your preliminary task, what do you feel you have learnt in the progression from it to the full product?
We filmed a lot of additional shots to what we wrote down originally on the story boards. This is because some of the shots we wanted, weren’t possible to do in the space which we had. We thought about the layout of the house very carefully before we filmed, however when we came to film not all of them were possible. Lighting in some cases was also a problem because we’d be filming all day and keeping the continuity of the light in the windows as it went dark was very difficult. The bathroom was also very dark, and we had to add additional lighting to make it easier for things to show up on camera. The same problem occurred when we were doing shots of the character walking down the stairs.
Editing was the hardest part, because we’d taken so many shots that it was difficult to pick the best ones and make them all run together in a sequence. I found using the editing software very difficult, and it took me a long time to get to grips with it. Making sure that there were no jump cuts in the finished piece was difficult and time consuming. We had to use two tapes which was more difficult when it came to editing this made it more difficult. We had to use two tapes because we left the first tape at college by accident, and when we came to film on a weekend, realised we couldn’t go back to get it. During editing, we also decided to change some of the shots to black and white, but make blood and some of the water stand out by making it red against the black and white. This was very difficult to do because it meant we had to use parts of the software on the computer which we weren’t familiar with.
The music plays a big part in the film because it really sets the mood and tone of the whole thing. It was very difficult to find the music which we did use in the end. This is because, it had to be copyright free. We had to search the internet for copyright free music, and we finally found the perfect piece. It fitted really well and set the mood, even if it did take us a long time to find.
Looking back over the project, I feel I’ve learnt a lot and my skills have improved greatly. Not just from the first two tasks, but from the beginning of the main project as well. I still found using the editing software a bit of a challenge, however I feel I did very well in the task I was given, and worked really well with my group. We all worked as a team which made things a lot easier.
If I had to do this production again, I’d probably change the titles. They seemed to get the most negative feedback, even though they were exactly the way the audience asked for them. I’d also like to learn more about how to use the editing software, so that it wouldn’t take me as long to do things next time. Apart from these two minor things, I don’t think there’s a thing I would change and on the whole I really enjoyed the project and I’m very happy with the end result.
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